托福寫作之年輕人的作為（附例文）

在托福寫作中，我們注意到題目中會經(jīng)常出現(xiàn)一些時間相關(guān)的關(guān)鍵詞。在這類題目中，有一類是關(guān)于今昔對比類的題目，這類題目往往是把過去和現(xiàn)在的一些事物進行對比。今天，老師就和大家分享托福寫作今昔對比之年輕人的作為。

　　例題：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Young people nowadays are more likely to make time and efforts to improve the world than young people in the past.同意與否：現(xiàn)在的年輕人比過去更愿意花時間和精力去改善世界。

　　這道題目對比的是今昔的年輕人對改善世界的態(tài)度和作為。我們都知道年輕人是一個國家科學(xué)技術(shù)發(fā)展的源動力，年輕人代表了很多的特點。但是如果從今昔對比來看的話，我們可能對過去年輕人的作為并不了解，但是，我們可以根據(jù)今昔環(huán)境的不同來解答題目。

　　首先，將今昔對比的問題，從社會背景出發(fā)，進行細化。

　　今昔對比類的問題比較容易困惑考生的是，不知道從哪里入手來寫。那么，我們就把今昔對比中的大環(huán)境細化一下：經(jīng)濟、科技、教育、環(huán)境、交通、觀念、法律等都是隨著社會環(huán)境的改變而轉(zhuǎn)變的一些方面。

　　其次，在細化的分類中，找出和題目相關(guān)的小話題。

　　因為題目是比較的年輕人對改善世界的作為，那么，教育、科技、經(jīng)濟、觀念等都是和年輕人改善世界掛鉤的。其中，因為教育體制的不同，人們對年輕人的要求不同，不再是單一的學(xué)習(xí)，而是多棲發(fā)展;科技的發(fā)展，給了年輕人更多好的想法，提高了年輕人做事的效率;經(jīng)濟的話，現(xiàn)在有很多大學(xué)生創(chuàng)業(yè)，政府這邊是有幫扶的，這樣就給了很多有想法的年輕人一個展示的平臺。

　　最后，梳理一下這篇文章的行文思路

　　1)年輕人不再只是以學(xué)習(xí)為主要目標，還關(guān)注國家或者國際事情;

　　2)學(xué)校里有很多的課外活動，幫助學(xué)生接觸和了解社會;

　　3)國家對年輕人的關(guān)注度更多，使得年輕人更有動力來改善世界。

　　參考范文：

　　There is a discussion about that whether young people nowadays are more likely to make time and efforts to improve the world than young people in the past. I hold the view that current young people exert themselves more on improving the world than young people in the past.

　　Firstly, the goals for young people nowadays in not just study. In the past, the only goal for young people was study. Parents put much pressure on the study of young people. As an old Chinese saying goes "pay no attention on what is going on beyond one's study and bury oneself in the classics", this depicts the condition of young people in the past. In the 2 1st centuries, young people also care about world affairs and they think about how to improve the world. Its young people, just stay at home regardless of what is going on outside, they will fall behind others with the passing of time.

　　Secondly, young people nowadays participate more on activities that improve the world. In the past, young people had less chance to take part in social activities. With the development of technology such as social media, young people can easily participate in discussing social affairs, political cases and even world affairs. Young people are the backbone of the society and they bear the hope of the future. With these advantaged prerequisite, more and more young people are willing to improve the world.

　　Last but not Least, the country pay more attention on young people and this makes more and more young people willing to make time to improve the world. From the global perspective, no matter on the marketplace or political arena, young people, as a new force, let more people see their efforts. The government also provides more chances to support the young people. Such as the "Youth Venture Fund" It is not only an admirable chance for the development of young people themselves, but also a huge development for the whole society wills this trend, more and more young people show their enthusiasm for social activities and they do have positive influences on some matters.

　　In a word, from the personal and national perspective, young people nowadays are more likely to take time and efforts to improve the world than young people in the past.

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