托福寫作：綜合寫作之筆記

托福綜合寫作除了考查考生的寫作能力，同時也考察快速聽記以及歸納信息的能力；如果同學(xué)們能夠在閱讀文章部分和聽力部分有比較準(zhǔn)確的把握，寫好一篇綜合寫作應(yīng)該不是很難。接下來呢，老師就給大家分享一些綜合寫作的記筆記的技巧。

One of the most promising new developments in personal transportation is the smart car. A smart car is one that utilizes advanced methods of engineering or computers with some kinds of artificial intelligence. While smart cars have not yet reached their full potential, they are sure to be beneficial, to all who eventually drive them.

One advantage of smart cars is that they will help traffic flow faster. A smart car will be able to handle many of the driving duties, thereby allowing the people in the car to attend to other matters. Because the car, for the most part, will be driving itself, it will be able to select optimal routes based on their lack of vehicles and the speed with which they may be traveled upon. This, in turn, will make travel times much shorter and keep traffic moving continuously.

In addition, a smart car will have lower maintenance costs. Since the car will be almost entirely run by computers, the computers will be able to alert the owner when there is a minor problem to be fixed. The owner will then be able to fix the car at a low cost as opposed to waiting for the problem to develop into a major issue that would require an inordinate amount of money to be sent.

STEP 1速讀+歸納 閱讀文章

三段式行文還是延續(xù)了總起段落+分段落1+分段落2的形式：

第一段作者提出了他的看法：Smart Cars – Promising New Developments

智能汽車實在好?。。?！

（那你猜猜看接下來的內(nèi)容？肯定就是具體講smart cars哪里好）

第二段作者馬上提出分論點一：SC will help traffic flow faster. 之后的內(nèi)容就是在demonstrate這個論點。

第三段緊接著提出分論點二：SC will have lower maintenance costs. 之后的blah-bla-blah也不過就在闡明該論點。

那么問題來了，我們是不是找到這些point就ok了呢？答案是：我們還需要往下挖掘一丟丟呢~ 看看下面的spots你有本事fill in嘛？（2mins）

Smart Cars – Promising New Developments

SUB-OPINION1： SC will help

l Handle many of the driving duties à drivers can attend to other matters

l Can choose a much shorter travel times & continuously moving traffic

SUB-OPINION2: SC have lower

l Computers will alert owner when is

l Can fix problem before it becomes major issue

是不是瞬間覺得思路清晰了？做到這一步的你已經(jīng)成功梳理出了閱讀文章的脈絡(luò)。當(dāng)然，我們現(xiàn)在做的事情在考場中你可以用速記的形式列出這些大小論點，沒有必要這么詳細(xì)。

以下是表的答案：

Traffic flow; optimal routes; maintenance costs; minor problem

進(jìn)入綜合寫作的第二部分你將會聽一個演講者就passage里面的內(nèi)容發(fā)表他的看法。據(jù)不完全統(tǒng)計，他一定是和passage的作者對著干的。。在這個環(huán)節(jié)，原本的passage會消失一下，你要磨耗鉛筆拿穩(wěn)草稿紙，因為接下來要聽聽力啦.

接著，閱讀passage又出現(xiàn)啦

STEP 2 速讀+歸納 聽力文章

演講者肯定是被派來來吐槽智能汽車哪里哪里不靈光的，我們來分析分析他的觀點。

他讓我們不要高興得太早一剛。。因為SC won’t be as breathtaking as everyone anticipates. 為啥呢？

首先，SC 的大規(guī)模制造將會使得汽車基數(shù)成幾何倍增長，這個就是

SUB-OPINION 1--More automobiles mean a much heavier traffic condition. 

注意：即使你剛才不小心放空了沒有catch到首段的分論點，我們大可利用闡述分論點的部分來猜測他究竟剛剛在說啥。比如，分論點一過后，演講者說“僅僅因為它們是智能車你就認(rèn)為自己可以擺脫交通大果醬嘛？”演講者是不是之前一直在說SC不能改變交通擁堵的現(xiàn)狀呢？

接著回憶一下SUB-OPINION 2：SC are not cheap to maintain. 就像Tesla這樣的電動汽車雖然環(huán)保但是大環(huán)境并沒有很好地在國內(nèi)支持它的體驗。這一個分論點演講者提得非常直白，大家應(yīng)該很好找到。

Smart Cars – Not as Breathtaking as People Anticipate

SUB-OPINION 1: SC will not ease traffic.

l Automobile technology improves à

l People will have to sit in

SUB-OPINION 2: SC will not be cheap to maintain.

l Use of very expensive,

l Replacing parts à

應(yīng)該沒有難道大家吧？Yiyi來揭曉一下答案啦：

Amount of traffic; longer traffic jams; custom-made parts; astronomical amount of money

總結(jié)陳詞時間！

當(dāng)你在填寫以上兩張表格的時候其實就是在記筆記，你所記錄的是閱讀文章和聽力文章的論點（注意：由于我們可以提前設(shè)想他們互相反駁彼此，所以在讀完閱讀文章后可以對于接下來的聽力內(nèi)容做一個可行性猜測，你懂的 ）

大家回去以后要記得鞏固老師說的知識點，最好的辦法就是演練一篇文章！

下面這篇文章大家可以試著記一下筆記，這是一篇關(guān)于環(huán)境話題的閱讀文章，注意3mins完成

Many environmentalists are wary of allowing the introduction of new species into an ecosystem. Ecosystems are fragile, and invasive species can often cause many problems when they are introduced where they do not belong. In fact, when they invade a new ecosystem, they often have several harmful effects.

For one, the introduction of new species can ruin the local ecosystem in many ways. First, it can act as a predator and eat other local species, thereby causing their their extinction. Another way is that it can consume too much of a valuable local food source. This consumption can cause other animals not to be able to eat as much as they are accustomed to. The result may be a decrease in the number of native species.

Another way that non-native species can be harmful is by causing the people who live in that area to suffer from financial losses. An example of this is the mesquite tree in the American Southwest. It thrives in areas with little water. However, because it soaks up the water from the ground, nearby grasses do not get enough and die. This causes local ranchers to lose money since they have to pay extra for animal feed. Also, the mesquite tree regenerates easily, so farmers must pay large amounts of money to remove the trees from their land.

以上就是為大家?guī)淼摹巴懈懽鳎壕C合寫作之筆記”的內(nèi)容，希望對大家有所幫助！

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